The Broken Road by Teresa Frohock
7 October 2014
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Tags: Frayed Empire, No.1, Stainless Steel Droppings RIP, Teresa Frohock, The Broken Empire
Just finished reading The Broken Road by Teresa Frohock which is a cunning novella in that it manages to combine urban fantasy and horror and bring to the fore two completely different and fascinating landscapes. I loved the idea of this, it just seems to turn things on their head and not follow convention at all.
We start the story in a fairly easy to imagine fantasy setting, a sort of mediaeval faux France if you will, where a Prince and his friend have come upon an effigy of a dead God (resurrected by the low born) and is the scene of a fairly recent sacrifice. This is the first portent of trouble to come. Travys is the young prince and in a world where a person’s voice is the conduit of magic he is greatly disadvantaged to say the least by being born mute. The Chanteuse noble born are gifted with magic which they use to keep strong the threads that separate the land of Lebhet from that of Heled. The nobles, however, have become spoilt and lazy spending their time behind the walls of the Palace. They’ve become vain and deceitful and petty rivalries and court politics have taken a front seat whilst the protection of the people they rule takes a poor second place. Meanwhile the woods and forests become the home to monsters who lurk in the dark as the threads weaken.
Now, this is a difficult book to write a review for because it’s only fairly short – a novella at just over 100 pages (I think??) so basically it would be really quite easy to spoil the plot for other readers. Basically, Travys is going to have a little bit of a rude awakening in a very dramatic fashion. He will become only too aware of the potential threat posed to his home and in order to do anything at all to prevent this trouble he’s going to have to put himself in the very heart of the last place he wants to be – Heled.
So, instead of ruining the plot, and the surprise that is involved in discovering Heled, I’m going to focus on other elements of the book. We have a simple but intriguing magical system that is not only quite unique but also helps you to gain a better understanding of Travys – simply in that he’s always had to struggle against the odds and use his own creativity in order to keep his tenuous foothold and survive in this duplicitous society. Oh, also, did I mention that Travys has a twin brother – a brother who is more powerful with a rich and varied voice and his own ‘set’ of supporting nobles?
In terms of pacing we kick off to an immediate start and from there the story moves forward at a rapid pace. I admit that I was hooked and read this almost in one sitting as I was desperate to know what was going on. I certainly didn’t succeed in second guessing anything and I admit I was very surprised when we finally got to read about Heled.
On top of that Frohock has a beautiful narrative voice which paints vivid pictures of the landscape upon the imagination and then fills them with chilling scenes from a nightmare of horrors. Nothing bloodthirsty or dripping in gore – just plain goosebump-invoking chilling.
Where criticisms are involved I only have one and I don’t think I’ll be alone in this sentiment – this book could definitely have been longer. And, literally, I mean that in the nicest possible way and not as a critic of short stories or novellas. There is just so much to be explored here that I feel that the number of pages could have been doubled and would still have felt short! Yes, I wanted more but more than that this particular story could support it. As it is I feel like I’ve had a snapshot into Travy’s world and whilst I don’t particularly want to join him in Heled (even if I get to carry a flamethrower) I will gladly take a few more glimpses – which, given that the Broken Road is also No.1 of the Frayed Empire seems highly likely!.
A bold and unconventional novel – plus just take a look at this cover if you like a bit of deliciously creepy!
I’m submitting this as one of my reads for RIP over at Stainless Steel Droppings. Check out the details here.
Books and travelling with Lynn 
I had no idea that this was a novella! Personally I don’t think that SFF short fiction gets enough love. Your review has me intrigued, Lynn. Hopefully Frohock writes a full-length novel in this world so that you can get your hands on the longer text you were hoping for! 🙂
What I really loved about this was the ‘shock’ value of the two different worlds which for me was just so unique and I, even now, don’t know how the author made it work but she just did. It was like reading typical fantasy blending with dark urban fiction. Her writing is so good – I did want more, but not in a negative ‘this didn’t work’ way – I just literally wanted more and I really think this story could have supported more. But, I think we get to return again so it’s all good.
Lynn 😀
I just finished this myself, and agree the story could be longer, but I felt that more in the “I want more” way than “I feel things were left out of this” way. Hopefully there will be more in this world from Frohock.
Yeah, agreed. I didn’t feel like there were any holes in the story at all – just, I didn’t want it to finish. I think there will be more because the title says No.1? Hopefully anyway.
Lynn 😀
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